Re- Drafts

Below you can see various scanned in pieces of work from my Music magazine , these documents are from different drafts I have done of my magazine cover, Article and contents have been very helpful and knowledgable, the main reason for this is because you gain an understanding of what you need to improve your work but also what fits the marking criteria. My aim for this peice of work is a B/C grade, however without the re drafting process i would of probably been looking at a E grade because I didnt know to the extent of what i needed to put in to be able to achieve a B/C grade.